Sunday, July 16, 2006

I said "I am full of endless hopes"

She said "check"

I said "I am full of hopeless ends"

She said "check"

I said "I found you in the end of far"

She said "check"

I said "I knew your heart's door's ajar"

She said "check"

I said "I love you"

She said "check"

I had nothing more to say

She said:

"CHECKMATE"

 

Posted by Behnam at 09:13:14 | Permanent Link | Comments (5) |
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1 - This poem is fantastic, every word is gorgeous...it brings the reader confidence in themselves, and brings hope in its beauty. Every line gives you great advice, it doesnt matter how you interpret it, it's amazing.thank you behnam jan
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Written by: esmaeel at 2006/07/16 - 10:17:07
2 - And you have gorgeously been generous with your compliment. Thanks (Comment this)

Written by: behnammoh at 2006/07/16 - 10:47:31
3 - Hi dear Behnam.your poem is like as melody .
have a good time for you and Mrs Taraneh and family
babay (Comment this)

Written by: AliMoh at 2006/07/16 - 14:12:39
4 - Dear AliMoh,

Thanks a lot. Same to you, too. (Comment this)

Written by: behnammoh at 2006/07/16 - 14:45:21
5 - I really wOndered, what a great & professional chess player she IS!!!
And what a lovely one you ARE, aziz* (Comment this)

Written by: Mashyane* at 2006/07/18 - 11:12:57
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